Monday, March 2, 2015
4 March Slice of Life Challenge - Crossed Toes
Floors pass up as we continue to go higher. Finally we reach the seventh floor and we step out of the elevator and walk to the balcony looking over the inside of the whole hotels. The railing is lined with bronze. Our hands turn white from hanging onto the railings, that drop would be a long one. We run back to the elevator just as someone has pressed every floor. We start the journey down by get stuck one floor down just as somebody gets onto the elevator. Not waiting for them to notice that they have to stop at every floor we get out and wait for the next one. It takes a while until we get back to the room just to wait until somebody opens the door. Thats when the fun really begins.
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When I was at a hotel for a hockey tournament my team would ride the elevators and press every single button then get out. Nice slice.
ReplyDeleteWhere were you? Good description.
ReplyDeleteI really like your description and this was very interesting! Good Job!
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ReplyDeleteThat was so fun! You used really good words and I loved the sentence: "Thats when the fun really begins." It was a great way to finish the slice
ReplyDeleteI liked and disliked how you ended the slice with a cliff hanger, if that makes sense.
ReplyDeleteBut otherwise, cool slice
DeleteI can totally picture the action of this slice. This line in particular is very good, "Our hands turn white from hanging onto the railings, that drop would be a long one."
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