Wednesday, March 4, 2015

6 March, Slice of Life Challenge - Yes, Ronaldo, Yes

The waves crash and slide up the sand creeping closer and closer. They snake closer and slips around my ankles. A chill runs up my spine because of the icy water. The sand sticks to my feet as the water and I take a step back from each other. As I turn around to leave the water comes back drawing me in deeper and deeper. But I have to resist the urge to run back and sink beneath the waves. I turn and run.

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4 comments:

  1. UnknownMarch 5, 2015 at 4:28 PM

    I really like that description of you walking through the water. Nice SOL!

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  2. UnknownMarch 6, 2015 at 10:58 AM

    I like how you explained having the urg to run back.

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  3. Lydia DonatoMarch 6, 2015 at 10:58 AM

    That's a great description Ronaldo.

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  4. UnknownMarch 7, 2015 at 7:41 AM

    I love that description too. The ocean is so cool. Nice Slice!

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